Open Poetry #34 |
The Veteran - Ed's Challenge |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The Veteran He took up rifle, musket balls Took the pledge, answered call For his land, right or wrong Stemmed the tide, the day was long God and Country, black and white Fought from sunrise into blood’s night Heard the screams, fell to rise Wearied soldier of battled cries ~*~ World War I, then II, and more Traveled far to Korean shore Every man who lost his life Left his family, left his wife Every curse for whom we are Why? He had to travel far, Into countries to help oppressed To fight a war against protest ~*~ A world caught up in time and tide Nation’s leaders took a side Vietnam, oh, what a ride Time to hear a Veteran’s side Anger still shakes him deep Nightmares still proclaim his sleep He traveled so far to keep Promises; his country weeps For those who are lost and gone His country, who went beyond Will of men who went along For a cause they thought was strong He led teams who went to war Tell him please, what he fought for It's not too late to say "Thank You" for God, Country, our red, white, and blue. My thanks to all of the Veterans who served their Country Now, and then. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ya dun real good dear friend. And I know you do appreciate the liberties you have. It is people like yourself that they stand for. Thanx Lady. |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Thankyou Sunshine for this write and thankyou to all of those since gone and those still protecting our shores. ~myheart~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Amen lady....incredibly moving writing. adding my thanks to all of the others... The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Not only would we not have freedom without them, we wouldn't have a country...and maybe we wouldn't even have ourselves. Thank you, Sunny One! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I just returned from our Remembrance Day ceremony in the park, and this actually was so very moving. I read it as the old fighter planes were doing their fly by here. Beautiful job Sunshine. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful! I'm sending this to my buds. Thanks Sunshine! |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Sunshine, You shed light where sometimes there is none. Thank you for sharing, for caring and being the hand that wrote what I can't. quatro |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
PERFECT! though it doesn't mention the current strife, I'm thinking it was written a while back. A profoundly moving read! (Especially the Viet Nam segment) Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
A wonderful tribute. Eric |
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