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She Glared at Me
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She Glared at Me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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She glared at me In askance of That liquid flow Of melting love The hissing of The touch of skin The smoldering Of flame within The joining of The sky above The color of The sense of love The binding of The two to one The circumstance When all was done Creation of The new of prime Into the new Of changing time The very core Of evermore ````````````````````````````````````````````` |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, like the sun, this blew a giant whole in the sky this morning sir Well Done! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
And isn't evermore a wonderful place to be! Good morning Sey, hope your day is great. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A passionate expression Sy. Much enjoyed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Sy ... just beautiful! I loved the effect of the shortened verse, you kept the cadence and rhyme flowing wonderfully. Have a terrific morning!  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sizzles...it does... sizzles. Good morn, Sy!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW Sy!! You sure lit up my face this morning!  You just heated up all of Canada! Just the word...'evermore'...is so wonderful and warm. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy wishing for you to have loving glances all the day long! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well wasn't this a pleasant and sizzlin' morning surprise! I get the distinct feeling that she beheld you with a wanton look rather than a "glare"...  Earthy Angel  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that was a tad different for you and how you can make it that tiny and still cram all that into a rhymed poem is beyond me. Guess that is why we sigh over our Sy?  |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
A pleasure to read Mr.Tabin. ~myheart~ Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ And your reply blew a hole in my morning. Gentle, Good morning sweet and thank you. scorpio, Thank you so much. Kit, Hugs back and thank you dear. Sunshine, Thank you love. Nancy, WOW sounds good to me.  Martie I'll go along with that. Earth Angel Wanton reads about right and thanks for the voice mail. You were a delight to hear. Sharon, LOL flattery will get you everwhere. Thank you myheart |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I decided to save you for an afternoon of delight~ Knew I'd love it~ I was right ...~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Thank you love. |
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