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Signing . . . . . Senryu
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Signing . . . . . Senryu |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Woodpecker signing his name into the oak tree.... ...thoughts of signing you.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hope your head is as strong... Excellent job, Sir. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie Maybe a little knife would be better then your head...yep. Sweet poem though..!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, I think you got some good advice, LOL enjoyed |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Some marks on wood are carved as deeply into hearts as if a knife was wielded there... In so few words, you tell such a story... with a tap-tap-tapping that is both a bird's search for lunch... and the love that gives reason for a heart to beat. Excellent work! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wonderfully expressed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent thoughts here Jamie. Well done. Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
vivid images with such beautiful thought behind it. well done.  The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jaime~ I ADORE the very thoughts etched into this one~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutely lovely Jamie. Maree into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ah, yes, leaving an impression on someone special indelible Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have such a naughty reply in my mind ~ but I dare not post it! tehe  EA |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Thoughts of signing you. Well said. Excellent imagery! INclan |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James darling man, Now this is exquisite, so much said in such a few words, perfectly placed words in a poem of pure perfection. I love it utterly, truly a master craftsman at work here as always Mushy    Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
smiling at the thought~~~ M |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
*smile* Beautiful...short and sweet. ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
BRAVO! |
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