Open Poetry #34 |
Wishing Summer |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
'tis cold and frost low cloud shroud covering cheer in shades of gray and haze of chill i long for sun for yellow joy in rays of delight warming heart with pansies winking i need to breathe gypsy song breeze bare feet dancing in meadow green lea beneath sky blue melody i imagine you in doeskin color and bright eye hues laughing me silly in tickle taste touch where then is summer? can she be swayed to make backward tracks and leave her shoes upon my door? i would wrap myself in her blissful halo smile light happy warm rush revel 80 degree heaven fed s.a.t. Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
i need to breathe gypsy song breeze bare feet dancing in meadow green lea beneath sky blue melody oh yeah....bare foot gypsy song and dance... absolutely love this... The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
i need to breathe gypsy song breeze bare feet dancing in meadow green lea beneath sky blue melody Oh, yes...me too!! Really love this write. ~myheart~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you ladies - let's shed our shoes and hit the meadow Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"i imagine you in doeskin color and bright eye hues laughing me silly in tickle taste touch" Love this stanza here...my favourite Susan. Yes...if only for a few days to have summer visit again. Hugs~ Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"where then is summer? can she be swayed to make backward tracks and leave her shoes upon my door?" ~ I like how your highly 'poetical' mind thinks! Linda |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"i imagine you in doeskin color and bright eye hues laughing me silly in tickle taste touch" Very captivating write. This stanza really stands out. Enjoyed the read... JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
susan..is only 78 here darn it was hoping I would qualify |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
You are all most kind, my friends, and I appreciate your warm replies - helps to make up for the frost outside- Dark - I'll take 78 anyday Hugs all - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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