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wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2004-11-08 10:12 PM

Erato teases
Hovering near enough to feel the heat
Radiating
Through the sheerness of her gown

Even as she whispers her imagery
Leaving it to wander aimlessly
In my consciousness

She slips the key to her puzzles
Into her bodice

Leaving my vocabulary gasping at the light
And grasping at the source

With her cheek against my chest
She’ll remind me
That this is merely sleepwalking

Holding my protest behind my lips
With the fingers of one hand
The other startles and sparks recollections

Viewed through cobweb and frosted glass
Veracity, is lost along with the details

And at that, the glances she gifts me
Are always in the half-light or night

The long light of dusk painting her orange
Or, tangled sheets and pale beauty
Washed blue in the dawn

She’ll show me only, the light in her eyes
And the tenuous shape of her hip in the dark

But never speaks of what would come after
Nor hints at what might lie ahead

myheart
Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 160
lost in your eyes

1 posted 2004-11-08 10:21 PM

This is excellent.
Going back to read it a third time!

~myheart~

Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

2 posted 2004-11-08 10:31 PM

Intriguing night tale m'friend. *winks to ya

This is a wranxy special and I love it!!!

take care man!
~D

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2004-11-08 11:21 PM

may she visit you often, we've grown accustomed and very fond of your(pardon the pun) musings.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-11-08 11:36 PM

wranx
LOL You know I had a girl friend like that once. Excellent write

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2004-11-08 11:47 PM

Captivating!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-11-09 12:40 PM

I'm with Martie - captivating write -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

7 posted 2004-11-09 05:13 AM

wow..

"With her cheek against my chest
She’ll remind me
That this is merely sleepwalking"

These in particular hit me. I love this...

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2004-11-09 05:27 AM

Ah you're a delight m'friend.

Absolutely wonderful.

Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2004-11-09 07:41 AM

Holding my protest behind my lips
With the fingers of one hand
The other startles and sparks recollections

Viewed through cobweb and frosted glass
Veracity, is lost along with the details

And at that, the glances she gifts me
Are always in the half-light or night
ok.... so every time I read something you offer...I ge the urge to hop a plane and sit a while.. have a couple of cold ones and see, if what I read into the words is really there.. ( chuckling).. though I know it is...
I think it is the thought of looking it in the eyes that compells me...

well done sir... well done indeed...

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

10 posted 2004-11-09 07:57 AM

With her cheek against my chest
She’ll remind me
That this is merely sleepwalking

Holding my protest behind my lips
With the fingers of one hand
The other startles and sparks recollections
********************************************
wOw wOw wOw

damn...can you translate your muse...

niiice,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2004-11-09 11:04 AM

.....dang!!!
This is beautiful!..and yes, captivating!

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

12 posted 2004-11-09 11:08 AM

talk bout your round table discussions with your muses? This one made my day
Enjoyed

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

13 posted 2004-11-09 06:59 PM

This is absolute beauty, Ed
as you always are.

Here is hoping this visage
transcends . . .

Susie
x

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

14 posted 2004-11-09 07:00 PM

actaully . . . may she KEEP transcending.

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

15 posted 2004-11-09 07:02 PM

Yum! I really enjoyed this wranx dear. It's been too long since I've read your words. Wonderful!

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

16 posted 2004-11-10 09:16 PM

Very sensous, Wranx!
Corinne

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

17 posted 2004-11-11 12:36 PM

bravo mein freund

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

18 posted 2004-11-12 03:28 PM

dang, how did I miss this one?? geez....
very well done sir! What a blessing your muse is!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

19 posted 2004-11-12 05:58 PM

river get you my friend? or did she just swallow up your pen and you haven't been able to write anything to share with us?

be nice to see something from you... of course it is always nice to read what you offer..and what you have offerd in the past... I'm just tired of reading the archives..lol

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