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Beneath His Arbor Trellis
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Beneath His Arbor Trellis |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sung warm in alto caress A tantalize of rice paper lace Fine loomed and sheer Exposing silken modesty to starlight kisses Opening sighs to the smile she misses Buds blush the cool November night Warily they tremble, yet bloom still the chill Moving with the sway of autumns breath Where dew collects within his palm her kisses follow Dampening the lips eclipse and hollow Filled once and then again of sea blue eyes Moved to deeper greens, made smooth and supple And bare beneath the heavens lay in willingness without delay Another song composed within the wild of child’s play Sung warm, a prayer unto his ear, her own soft say Defining virgin yet again, tutored to be sweet Labored to be long, in tender notes held close and strong Spirited the touches of uncertainty and teased so cleverly November rose, most joyous spares the clothes of night Sung warm beneath the frosting blooms, her heart his true delight Copyright Kkh 11/08/04 |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
...and might I offer you a delicate rose for this beautiful read this evening? ~myheart~ Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
this is beauty. breathtaking write td |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Where Autumn's breeze shortens each breath causing the heart to pound faster, rises the anticipation of two lost in crisp orchestra of starlight kisses. Seems the inspire from this season has found a pen of gold to indulge. Passion laced in as much beauty as the eyes of remember and a treasure to hold. ( rasises glass for a toast ) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No one caresses a well crafted poem as finely as our own Cowboy...so all I can do is cheer his toast. Well done, Kathleen! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Raising my glass, and wishing you all sparkling autumn memories. A toast returned and thank you. TD |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
wOw...like the texture to this! niiiice **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Was thinking ... Autumn seems the nicest time to build an arbor. ( Forgot to click library ). Must have still had my eyes closed. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"November rose, most joyous spares the clothes of night Sung warm beneath the frosting blooms, her heart his true delight" WOW! JL |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Defining virgin yet again, tutored to be sweet Labored to be long, in tender notes held close and strong Spirited the touches of uncertainty and teased so cleverly November rose, most joyous spares the clothes of night Sung warm beneath the frosting blooms, her heart his true delight this was dreadfully good, had me sighing and wanting more... This has defined a touching love story with affection and heartfelt images...thank you for sharing |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
November is the nicest time to build anything...the foundation is sound, and the heart sees clearest with eyes closed. Smiling... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ I am 'almost' speechless ... BUT  ... this is such a stunning piece ... it deserves more accolades ...~Pumping it to the top of the heap ... as a treat to those who would be blessed to read one of the finest poetesses at this place~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Kathleen! I stand in awe and applaud you! Into my library this goes. Hugs~Nancy Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow....this is an awesomely vivid write! Eric |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So many thanks to each of you. I feel blessed to be among such beautiful people, writing and reading life, and sharing poetry. TD |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Odd....just yesterday I was thinking of writing about a white worn trellis, one leading to the window sill of a fair lovely maid...seems you beat me to the punch, and not only beat me, but created something so vividly beautiful...as only you can. |
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