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November's Dance
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November's Dance |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Come with me to November's ball Decorations supplied by scorched leaves as they fall. Scattered about like dicarded party favours They crunch under foot exuding scents one should savour. The wind through bare branches be our violins. As the dropping of chestnuts signals the party's begin. Thick carpet of green means no need for our shoes We can waltz one with nature Till bare toes dot with dew. If chilled we'll take refuge in balsam and cedar Enter bunnies.... then us... Just like follow the leader. So meet me tonight under glow of pale moon. Celebrate changing of seasons For winter's arrival is soon. . . . ~myheart~ November 2004 |
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Martie
Moderator
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
myheart How lovely are your party decorations...I'd love to come and dance with you. Welcome to Passions...I've been seeing all your replies...appreciate those too.  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A good and proper entrance...dressed to the nines! Welcome. TD |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
thankyou Martie and ThisDiamond |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! And what a beautiful entrance you have made! I am sure you will love it here! Please check your email for a special Passions greeting. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
myheart Welcome and a delightful read. |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Enchantress and Mr. Tabin, thankyou both! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyHeart~  So VERY nice to read such a lovely 'first post' from you~ You will be enjoyed here ... thank you for coming~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
 MyHeart, such a beautiful first poem! Welcome to Passions!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Thankyou Marge and Alli !! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a wonderful first post! Looking forward to reading more from you! Welcome to Passions! |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Thanks so much Sunshine. |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
And yes its cold in the fall, I loved it!!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now that is what I call decorating for the occassion. A very beautiful write with some wonderful images. Welcome to Passions and may your time in here be a rewarding and educational experience. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Welcome to passions, myheart...what a lovely nic.... Your poem is timely, some people don't like November..but you make it seem pleasent... and you are corrct.."For winter's arrival is soon." -------- -ice ><> Come read to me some poem, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Autumn is a beautiful time of year. Enjoyed. Welcome to Passions!  into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Steve, Mark, ice & Dark Angel - many thanks! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful write! |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
thankyou passingshadows! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You know... Came back for another read...it was your poem that inspired mine. I think it was the bunnies. There is a special sensuality about the autumn...the moon knows, nature knows...and some of us more sensitive also know. Deserving of another bump. Thanks for the inspiration. That's how it is here. TD |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
wow ! Thankyou ThisDiamond!!! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
What an entrance! Well done! I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Deb |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
BloomingRose - Thanks! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful poem! *S* And yes... November has a particular beauty this year... and now it's brought us you... I look forward to reading more of your work... WELCOME! *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Beautfiully written and totally agree with everyone above me..... |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Thankyou, thankyou, suthern and Lee !! |
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