Open Poetry #34 |
Perplexion |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I was talking to the table that sits beside the chair, No answers were forthcoming; it was if I was not there, Now I admit to some frustration, because the words I spoke, Seemed to bounce right off the table; off that polished piece of oak. I was speaking not in parables; in tongues not my discourse, But still there was no answer; then I thought with some remorse, Perhaps it was my manner, my demeanor was insulting, Maybe with my inner being is where I ought to be consulting If perchance I spoke more contritely, the table would reply, Collecting all the thoughts I had, I gave it one more try, But still there was no answer, it was if I was not there, I must admit to my perplexion of the table by the chair. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, then... I guess the lesson has been taught. Seriously? [You don't want serious, but that's ok, it's been a hard day here...] Seriously...keep it up. After awhile, even the polish on the oak lightens up, and takes on the touch of real life... as you well know. Nothing but admiration here... |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
it's difficult sometimes no one listens when you're perplexed well,don't be vexed lay your words gently now... |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I know the feeling, except, I get no answer from my cockateil. Thanks, Melton |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I have the same problem when I talk to myself by the way, did you miss this or do you just not care to duet with me? /pip/Forum90/HTML/003584.html |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
much enjoyed this read |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
takes you back to a basic philosophical arguement about whether these objects are actually there when you leave the room or they're only a reality while you're there... enjoyed the lightness yet thoughtfulness of the write... |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
makes ya think.. doesn't it? good write Pepper |
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