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EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

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0 posted 2004-11-06 11:28 PM

Love Is A Wonderful Thing

Rising necessity mounts rugged shore
leaping from escarpment to precipice
with the fluidity of a ripple.
Ocean spray thunders higher dousing the
headland in fine drizzle. Ledge greasy,
clamber sluggishly this vertical wall
adamantine rock mashed to cheek...words of
orison on lips. Press heart too ledge, and
savor the upsurge of the incoming
tide. Each concussion commingles with the
cadence of the soul, 'til infeasible
the separation of one from other.
This is what calenture feels like. Arrest
it and you will know the ardency I
have for thee. Love is a wonderful thing.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-11-07 05:27 AM

now this is more the Kevin I know

good to see you writing again

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

2 posted 2004-11-07 08:05 AM

Hi Dixie. Thank-you for stopping to read this poem. Glad you liked it. It always makes me smile when you stop in to read my stuff.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-11-07 08:45 AM

Kevin~
Who could not be drawn to thoughts such as this -

'the fluidity of a ripple'

- I am pleased to read you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

4 posted 2004-11-07 08:52 AM

Hello Marge...glad to see you popped in for a read. Always a pleasure my friend. Love - Kevin

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2004-11-07 11:22 AM

Kevin

Love the passionate imagery in this...especially:

"Ledge greasy,
clamber sluggishly this vertical wall
adamantine rock mashed to cheek...words of
orison on lips." Yep, that gets a wow!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-11-07 11:25 AM

WOW!!! Beautiful Kevin!!
Wonderful imagery!
Hugs~Nancy

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-11-07 11:44 AM

yes - wonderful - and you write it so well -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

myheart
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since 2004-11-05

Posts 160
lost in your eyes

8 posted 2004-11-07 12:28 PM

very nice. enjoyed.

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

9 posted 2004-11-07 12:38 PM

Love my favorite word.
This is beautiful Sweetie.
Love it yes I love it.

;-)

Hugs
Amour Vous,

Within this heart you'll find love

Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

10 posted 2004-11-09 01:50 AM

"Love is a wonderful thing"

truth is, love, is a word
used as a crutch, or
a convenience ... when it
suits an agenda.

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

11 posted 2004-11-18 12:46 PM

Hey Sweetie,
Just needed that certain touch,know where
to find it.

;-)

Amour Vous

Always

Within this heart you'll find love

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