Open Poetry #34 |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
A fleeting chance No one will listen The night is dark Secrets come full circle Thoughts are vague as we try to guess Hope is dying We lay to rest Stars run bright in a dying premise The light is gone We hurt to remember Souls breath as one We can only pray Love is lost This dying day Echoes of thought Pain is in out heart We once loved Forever is at fault |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Forever is at fault" oh, so much within that one line enjoyed the read! |
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stevebrklynnyc Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 292GA, Camden |
Thank you, it just comes from the heart. |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
enjoyed this very much |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
enjoyed the read me friend... jwesley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Steve~ 'The night is dark Secrets come full circle' I sure like that thought~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I understand too well |
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