Open Poetry #34 |
Frosting Kisses |
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
tiny flecks of frosting lingering on your lips until I lick them gently eagerly tasting the sweetness of your mouth hungry for more the cake can wait |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
hmm, so you can have your cake and eat it too...well at least the best part! enjoyed Awake through motion with curiosity to curtain your first move |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool write |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
loved this and laughed with it....great write. jwesley |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Heh heh...good one Sharon!!! Hugs~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
ahhhh...delectable ~smiling~ thoughts M |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
oh yes - they say the frostings the best part Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This was headed for MC, but I decided to make it just playful..thanks for reading it! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Head it on over, we can take it Playful it was too! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I should say so!! How very romantic! Deb |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Smile... You can always do an MC version. And I like my cake with ice cream please. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, a yummy write. And LOL at Karen's reply. Licking imagery. HMMMM. Wonder what you could do with that? |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Enjoyed this M's deVine, and yes an MC version would be appetising into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a delight this is! *S* Of course... it makes me think of kisses that are sweet without the frosting... LOL... Yes... this is definitely one to heat up the kitchen! *S* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
NICE! JL |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
LOL, enjoyed... grinning here |
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