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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Your Eyes In the quiet dark When moon reflects in your eyes I seek your essence.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah my friend... you hint of things both physical and mystical here.. what indeed is in the essence... and in the eyes unclouded... nice work sir.. you certainly made me think with this one..and feel.. something I may have to write myself.. thank you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Can't say it much better than Cpat did... quite the vision you are looking at, and into, Scorpio. You are extremely fortunate! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Well done my friend. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hello dear scorpio! So good to see you posting again! This has such a dreamlike quality to it.. rather mysterious, is she? They say the eyes are the window to the soul, do you believe that to be true? Wonderful post...made for daydreaming.  ~Smiles & Hugs & Love ya, Tinker~ Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and your beautiful essence shines through this touching write.  Love & Light, EA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
scorpio This poem made me think of one of my favorite songs called "Your Eyes".  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Ron. I await your next poem. I'm fortunate Karilea. Thank you for your support. Sy, I appreciate and thank you for the "welldone". Tinker, she is beautiful. The mystery is in why she loves me. Thank you for your wonderful reply. Thank you Linda. Your support is most appreciated. I remember that song Martie. Thank you for stopping in to read. Thanks Dixie. believe in what your heart feels... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
short, sweet, and beautiful. ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Alli. Your comments are appreciated. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The title by itself draws one in, for in eyes lies the gateway to a soul. And it seems you have found that treasured place. I wonder why she does as well....from time to time... Well done! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very, very well done m'friend! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Barry and Midnitesun. I appreciate your comments. believe in what your heart feels... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely....James |
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