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Jaime Fradera
Senior Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2004-10-20 08:01 PM

The Amazon

1:
You find me
In my dreams,
In a place of weightless floating
Where I somehow knew
That you would be.
To sooth my pain,
You come to me,
You tall,
You big,
You lush and gentle Amazon,
Hauntingly, impossibly beautiful;
And I am nude.

2:
You tell me that you know me,
Know my passion, longing and desire.
You say that you had met me years ago.
You keep insisting that you know me,
That you Know me.
You keep insisting
It is I who do not notice
Or can not remember.
And you keep saying
That one day I finally will.

3:
You come to me.
With strong and gentle arms, and even legs,
You TAKE me,
and you are nude,
and no one ever came to me like that!
You thrust a scrap of paper
in my hand, it is in Braille,
leave a lush and gentle kiss
upon my lips,
then, vanishing,
you wake me me,
And the note you wanted me to read is gone,
And my eyes
Are filled with tears.

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-10-20 09:01 PM

a lush dream indeed!

and i always hate waking up from a dream that takes my breath away....

enjoyed this

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2004-10-21 02:50 AM

That's quite a luscious dream, Jaime.
Be careful about those Amazon.com women though, they want to sell you some more audio books. LOL

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

3 posted 2004-10-21 03:43 AM

wish my dreams were like yours

exciting write

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-02-08 02:58 PM

Sometimes we readers
have to step back
to see the treasures...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-02-08 04:24 PM

nice

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2005-02-08 11:57 PM

Nice writing...James

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2005-02-08 11:59 PM

Wow, did you ever hold the reader's attention! Interesting ending.

....jo

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