Open Poetry #34 |
A Promise Of Rain |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
As if ten years from water... I thirst for your touch. And while moments fall in parched anticipation. Your fingers gather as clouds to my horizon. With the promise of rain... As I lay myself before you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful yet sad, makes me |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh Eric...how very beautiful! The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!!!! Oh my...I am speechless... BEAUTIFUL Eric!! Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I've gotta start visiting more often...this is simple in its beauty... reminds me of a calming waterfall! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Beautiful. EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
As if ten years from water... I thirst for your touch. Oh, yes... I know this... how welcome such clouds, their promise... and the fulfillment they give. *S* Beautiful work!! |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Ericc, this an extremely well written piece. ~myheart~ Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The yearn of this is magnificent. TD |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Eric, Eric, Eric, your reign as king of minimalism at its best continues - absolutely love this - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I always love your poems |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc A touch of grace, enjoyed. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
G o r g e o u s! Loving you, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Eric Your words are as smooth as silk and so beautifully written, as always. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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