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Open Poetry #34

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-11-03 04:52 PM

Pressing

I know all about urgency
the very pull of the moon
to hurry through the day
to be with the edge of darkness
to touch the tips of fire
and it’s smoldering burn
waxes tender caress of melt
a night stirred with no sleep
where breath is the dark’s lullaby

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2004-11-03 04:56 PM

very nice Helen... as usual.. you leave me impressed

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-11-03 05:03 PM

Yes, excellent

Dave

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-11-03 09:12 PM

awesome!

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2004-11-09 02:34 PM

Wow...!!!

Eric

myheart
Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 160
lost in your eyes

5 posted 2004-11-09 02:37 PM

double WOW !! ~myheart~

Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2004-11-09 04:14 PM

Yeah... I must agree WOW!

Maybe rename to "Diary of My Heart"??

This is really good.
Enjoyed

JL

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2004-11-09 06:56 PM

This is really good.

I applaud you, and add my own personal WOW!!!

Great write Helen.

TD

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2004-11-09 10:43 PM

bump. hugs.

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