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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-11-03 08:23 AM

candy cone with tattoos
and sensations
in your eyes
like a speck of sand
that you had to rub

I brought you demons
they were small then
but you knew how
to make them grow
into winds that chilled you

and made you emboss your skin
into suggestions of sensual
for a blind man to read
when his hands found love
and the source of your voice

whispering directions
___________

Dark

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-11-03 08:25 AM

soothing and comforting
Excellent and well written

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-11-03 08:28 AM

for a blind man to read
when his hands found love
and the source of your voice

~*~

Voices are so interesting...

Enjoyed, sir...

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2004-11-03 08:31 AM

"and made you emboss your skin
into suggestions of sensual
for a blind man to read
when his hands found love
and the source of your voice

whispering directions"

Enjoyed this part particularly.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

4 posted 2004-11-03 09:20 AM

what a wonderful tribute
a write of honor
hope she sees it

wow, you
K

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-11-03 10:04 AM

Mmmmmmmm- D - especially love the last part -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2004-11-03 01:17 PM

sometimes hearing a voice is all one needs...

enjoyed your thoughts Dark...

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-11-03 02:06 PM

"whispering directions"

we all need direction sometimes...

thank you.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2004-11-03 03:13 PM

brought you demons
they were small then
but you knew how
to make them grow
into winds that chilled you

Fantastico Mr Dark.

Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2004-11-03 07:42 PM

heal me
feel me
will you be my jesus
and let me be your messiah?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-11-03 08:26 PM

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

11 posted 2004-11-03 09:23 PM

but you knew how
to make them grow
into winds that chilled you

and made you emboss your skin
into suggestions of sensual
for a blind man to read
when his hands found love
and the source of your voice

whispering directions
============================

*whispering whew*

WHHHHHHHEEEEEWWWWWWWWW *L*

Poetry is emotion put into measure.
The emotion comes by nature ...
but the measure is acquired by art.

Thomas Hardy

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