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A Merry Day
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A Merry Day |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Merry Day A merry day the sun does shine It sipped the dew right off the vine It started shadows dance of shade And there she sits a milking maid Now tell me friend if you were I Would you stay and only sigh Or would you say good morning maid Can you see the dancing shade? Would you care to dance with me? The grass is green the air like tea. We’ll dance upon a rainbows run I’ll help you get the milking done She looked at me and squirts a stream That wet the merry of the seem But wiped my face and kissed my brow And said I will but just not now. Is that not so, the common case It’s not the time it’s not the place. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
WEll, if Randy doesn't mind, I'd dance with you!!! Hey, what say we all dance together, right off into a rainbow sky... This one was ambrosia flavored with a hint of spice.... Smiles and hugs |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I would dance with you any sweet morning, Sy.  What a delightful read to start my day! Flowing and rythmic as always ... big smiles and a hearty good morning to you!  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, you may not have gotten the maid to dance, but you certainly got the sun to shine! Good morning, Sy! What a beautiful way to start this Wednesday! Wheee!   |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Good morning Sy. I enjoyed this very much. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What a wonderful upbeat way to start the day! Now if your dance card isn't too full.. may I have the next one Sy? ~Morning hugs, dances, and tea, Nancy~ Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Too true, too true . . . sigh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ, Thanks for the ambrosia flavored with a hint of spice. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, Thank you sweet I knew you would. Sunshine, Thank you dear. scorpio, Thank you and glad you enjoyed. Nancy, You surely may. Krawdad, True and thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A merry day the sun does shine It sipped the dew right off the vine It started shadows dance of shade And there she sits a milking maid Now tell me friend if you were I Would you stay and only sigh Or would you say good morning maid Can you see the dancing shade? Would you care to dance with me? The grass is green the air like tea. We’ll dance upon a rainbows run I’ll help you get the milking done She looked at me and squirts a stream That wet the merry of the seem But wiped my face and kissed my brow And said I will but just not now. Is that not so, the common case It’s not the time it’s not the place. ================================== YEP-- the WHOLE poem...cuz their aint no way I can pick a fave, each and every word, line and rhyme of this belong together! Sy--do you know what a doll you are? This poem is absolutely DELIGHTFUL!!! What a treat to read aloud... ya got the cows, chickens and pigs doing a morning jig...( and the moths) LOL and then there is that oh so clever closing couplet... Is that not so, the common case It’s not the time it’s not the place. you're just too cool.... Rock and Roll poetry...you and Randy. ya get extra winkies for this one. LOL  Poetry is emotion put into measure. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
well I didn't make it for the morning, but I would enjoy an afternoon dance with you any day Sey! Hugs. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
 Just stopping by again Sy, hoping for an afternoon waltz. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
  And a merry day it is Sy...once more around the floor? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You lift my spiris to the sky And there I lie and there I sigh Just dance a dance with Randy guy And He will fly and change my sigh Winkiewinkie Kit, For you I have an open book. Nancy, Lovely just lovely. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle, Like I said my book is open. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, once again I'm late are you too worn out by this time of evening? |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
oh gee! Am I too late for a dance, too, Sy? Your poems are always such a delight to read. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing and Smart, You are next on my list. |
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