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Closed Minds |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Closed minds allow dust gathering mental chards of decay Heedless of moral codes they still find something to say Suffer not my mind with thoughts from your vomitous attitude they are no more than the Devil’s words regurgitated and spewed Provoking with a fire brand without thought to scars of flame unless you’re willing to stand up shut up and take the blame! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Talk about fire breathing poets! When you return to the board, you return with an amazingly hot write. Good to read you again, m'friend. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hip Hip! She's BACK! Welcome home, PdV! |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like this poem. It has power. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME BACK SHARON!!! You have been missed! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Wow! You said it. Welcome Home  It's good to have you back... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Errrr...wow...yahuh...WOW! Nicely (maybe that isn't the correct word) done~!~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Good gracious! When you come back you sure come back with the fire in you I will say that Remind me not to ever get on your bad side will you please. Whew girl that was on fire! Example is not the main thing in influencing others, it is the only thing. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yowzer! Well this just comes right out and says somethin', now don't it? |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Some great advice PDV Maree  Oh, you speak to me in riddles |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I do believe you could beat someone shamed with a feather quill... in fact, I think you just did.  Welcome home hugs for a very passionate verse.  and yes'm, I'm very proud of everybody today. It was a good day, wasn't it? |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A very powerful piece with a lot of conviction behind each word and a joy to read. Welcome back to the pages of blue. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lots of poetic clout in the thoughts presented in this piece. I like the intensity. Nice writing. Eric |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for reading!!! This poem was done off the cuff in reaction to someone who made me angry! Reading it again, I see that anger and really, I am not that mean! LOL I'll write something sweet and kind later. I just got online after being offline for almost 6 months. A lot has happened in that time (like losing a hard drive with a lot of my work on it!). But you'll be seeing more of me now that I'm 'back'!  Compassion is the heart and integrity is the soul of excellence. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
yeah girl! I like that... hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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