Open Poetry #34 |
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Tears Of Innocence |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
![]() Too frequent … too many these tears from the eyes of the innocent child that within me resides~ Burrowed deep today in yesterdays’ disguise of things that happened before these young eyes~ Trying so hard to figure out Why … Why the voices still shout But I’ve no answer to the why~ Childhood in tatters tears need release the tears of innocence that will not cease~ I beg the plentiful God, if He will … take these tears these tears these tears of innocence that cry me still~ ~This one is for a very Special ~K with much love and understanding~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a heartfelt piece Marge.. Full of understanding and compassion. Your friend is fortunate to know you. Heart Hugs to you both~ Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, An on going process. Enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely Marge...James |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hug on the way! Yes, the "W" word...Why... So many children ask that question over and over...and continue to ask into and through adulthood...I know it well...I asked why for almost 50 years...Now I understand, and such peace feels so wonderful... A beautiful and touching piece of your own heart has been given to us today...and I shall hold it softly, never allowing it to be dropped, cracked or bruised....... |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Your new friend will love this! So compassionate and understanding! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is so pretty. You are such a good friend. Love ya, Betty |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! What a super heartfelt write Marge! This is a real open hearted but intense ending... "I beg the plentiful God, if He will … take these tears these tears these tears of innocence that cry me still~" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for this |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sending hugs dear Margie...remember always, in the end, calm white wins...always! Well written and thought Luv Lee J. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
so very very lovely Marge...whispering of comfort... The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
So moving Marge. Eric |
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