nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
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2004-10-20
04:55 PM
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Wynter Friends
and when the whispers come to make the smiles appear a rhythm comes to join my rhymes for two of us to share
the rain delays but cannot hold my altered state of mind for you are there to pick me up the you between the line
the secrets shift, the winds of change across the miles of know etchings in the sound of words to rain a colored bow
to smile that smile from out within a season timed just right from there to here and here to there to warm a lonely night
inspired thoughts in silent hold no fingertips to touch instead the air awakes from sleep the feelings lost of such
releasing ties that twist too tight emotions overdrawn in their place, disguised in love of friendship, come each dawn
M(issy)
"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss)
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
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2004-10-20
04:57 PM
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My gosh Maureen...this is lovely!! Comforting to know someone is there. Hugs~~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~
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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
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2004-10-20
05:30 PM
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Thanks Nancy, sometimes friends show up when you need them the most
even if only on the blue...
hugs M
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Gentle Spirit
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2004-10-20
06:51 PM
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I see a smile in your words.... and it looks so very lovely on you.
Beautiful writing M~The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love....
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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
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2004-10-20
07:44 PM
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Thanks for stopping by, Donna...
friends are always welcome...
M
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muted
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since 2004-01-15
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
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2004-10-20
09:05 PM
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sweetly written you are soooo lovely
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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
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2004-10-20
09:11 PM
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This is the smile I needed tonight... the knowing that you are not totally alone...that when you reach out? Others reach back... it's the way of friends, dear girl... and you have befriended many...
because it's in your heart to do so...
this was my smile this evening...
oh by the way?
Where's my doll?
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garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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Florida, USA
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2004-10-20
09:24 PM
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This is so pretty, Maureen. I love the way it sounds when it's read out loud. Hugs,
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Robert Joseph
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South Carolina
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2004-10-24
12:30 PM
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Love, life, and longing...a most precious expression of the three.
Robert Joseph
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Sunshine
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2004-10-24
01:17 PM
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This touches me in all of the right ways, Maureen... a lovely gift to your friends...
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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
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2004-10-24
03:11 PM
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M(issy)B(lissy)~ This is an awesome penning~
'the secrets shift, the winds of change across the miles of know etchings in the sound of words to rain a colored bow'
"to rain a colored bow" ... a line to wish for~
How lovely word-lovely you are this day~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))><
Email noles1@totcon.com
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Midnitesun
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Gaia
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2004-10-24
03:26 PM
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We must have been listening to the call for the winds of change at the same time.
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passing shadows
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displaced
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2004-10-24
06:40 PM
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