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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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lady tree let me barefoot climb the suspire of your limbs give me the sky there from your bosom mark my eyes with your scenery panorama surround press me between mountains with a pillows comfort pretend me to be the storms of north that bring skin shiver chill to the inside of the soul and make even caution want a lover with strong hands and a lifetime day to paint butterfly wings as they fly to sigh sounds _____________ Dark |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and make even caution want a lover =================== oh man that line just rocks!!! with strong hands and a lifetime day to paint butterfly wings as they fly to sigh sounds ================================ oh yeah.... ya make the moths sigh too...  Poetry is emotion put into measure. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
pretend me to be the storms of north that bring skin shiver chill ~*~ Not hard to imagine today, with the temps beginning to lower... so now every time I shiver, I shall think of this poem...  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"pretend me to be the storms of north that bring skin shiver chill to the inside of the soul and make even caution want a lover" no need to pretend your words are my scenery, Dark... K |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
A tree shall bend with the wind in a dance of lover's touch - I like this image - Wonderful write, D - sighful -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
both erotic and saintly how you wove amid their branches we thank you for releasing us a bit this morning. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very ingenious...but then, it comes as no surprise...each one you write, is better then the last... Tremendous! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know I luv yer style |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sensual and captivating and unique in it's content. That wraps up to be an excellent poem and an excellent read. |
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