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Open Poetry #34

Escaping Steaming

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-10-20 03:59 PM

Escaping steaming
Pushing a demand to flow upon stations
No

Dark nights rushing
Demanding running through trees signing ways
No

State dressed
That embarasses a hang man
No

Peace at last
On a treadmill
Yes

That you escaped
For so long
Yes

To understand
The nature of the world
Yes

And to be grateful
For bull bearings
Yes

Those gentle nights
When you understood the world
Yes

On those sandy nights
When you understood bliss
Yes

On those nights
When bliss required sand into the bearings
Yes

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

1 posted 2004-10-21 01:34 AM

your style is remarkably daring and original...write on!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2004-10-21 02:08 AM

oh yes
escaped no
survived yes

brought back memories of redwood trees
and the cool sand on the beach
just what it made me feel. thanks

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-10-21 01:36 PM

I mind dump at times

They are ideas that I record somewhere so if I lose my systems the ideas are something I can still come back to

I did that a lot on the Open Scroll - just letting a dump of ideas come through

I do get emails from Piptalk on occasions for stretching the limit

Thanks

Dave

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