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Without You By My Side
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Without You By My Side |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Thoughts…. All leading back to you... You and this horrible situation That we’re in together. You say it’s not my problem, But it is. You say not to worry about it, But I do. How couldn’t I? You’re the one true thing in my life That actually makes me happy, And now you’re being taken away too… HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO REACT?!?! HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO DEAL WITH THIS?! Hyper-ventilating… My stomach’s in knots… Just from trying to breathe… Every time I think of you, Another tear falls…. Because I think of all the times, That we’re not going to have together, That I shouldn’t spend with anyone else… HOW CAN LIFE BE SO CRUEL?! How can life be so cruel……..? You pull me closer to you, As you softly whisper in my ear, “I will always love you…..Forever…” The words I’ve been looking for, Just said at the wrong time… Because you’re leaving me soon… And life won’t be the same… Without you by my side. "I tried so hard...But in the end...It doesn't even matter...."~Linkin Park |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Interesting. It sounds almost like a jail door slamming. Dave |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
wow , this is so sad , I can feel your heart yearn , where are they going , will they not return Hope |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
They will come back...It just sucks to bad, when I think about it, it knocks my breath out of me...Because I can't imagine life (if only for a "short" time) without this person.... "I tried so hard...But in the end...It doesn't even matter...."~Linkin Park |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...you deal one day at a time...and try to bring the stress level down to a manageable level...James |
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lil' Angel Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 116 |
Wow! Great poem. Lil' Angel |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
felt this one ouch. hope it gets better, and its got to right? lovely poem, if a bit sad and painful! love and empathy darkness now that i think about it "lovely" might not be the right word, but *sigh* been replying for too long so deal with it!!! nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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