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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2004-11-01 06:25 AM


slowly
slowly
another generation
is passing

goodbye
goodbye
young boys
and girls

flowers
of the forest
are closing their petals

another day falters
into the sea


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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

1 posted 2004-11-01 06:34 AM


yes.... it does.


LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-11-01 08:45 AM


yup, another day faulters into the sea

enjoyed...

ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 610

3 posted 2004-11-01 07:28 PM


Loved it.

~Laura~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2004-11-01 08:52 PM


nicely put
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
5 posted 2004-11-01 08:56 PM


Loved the way you put this...much enjoyed the read.

jwesley

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
6 posted 2007-05-15 12:24 PM


felt the CBE , four movements in total and different directions, and different colors.
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