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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10

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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-11-01 02:23 AM

When the lights go out and I'm all alone,
I close my eyes and see all I've known.
Something new for me,
I just wish I could clearly see.
The best gift of my life indeed,
Is you...the woman I need.
Something seems to be disturbing me,
But what it is you don't see.
It's the longing inside of me to hold you near,
It's waking up without you that I fear.
Always smiling outside always scared inside,
This bond to you I am tied.
Like Saphires in the sky,
I lay awake at night and sigh.
Maybe one day you'll tell me to be near,
So I can hold you true and dear.
Living without you is a horrid thought,
So much happiness to me you've brought.
Words cannot express this high,
You give me Saphires in the sky....

I can fly like a penguin

© Copyright 2004 Kyle - All Rights Reserved

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-11-01 09:19 AM

Kyle this reads like one huge *sigh*.
How beautiful this is!
Lovely write full of hope and longing.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

MGROVES

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california

2 posted 2004-11-01 09:36 AM

ahh! this is exceptional!
beauty from ones heart

DavePage
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3 posted 2004-11-01 01:07 PM

Almost esoteric

Dave

Paula Finn
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missouri

4 posted 2004-11-01 01:25 PM

Just lovely son of my heart

ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-11-01 07:58 PM

Such beautiful expressive thoughts.
Nice write.
TD

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The World of Poetry

6 posted 2004-11-01 08:11 PM

beautiful write . . .

~Alli~

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Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-11-01 08:16 PM

Such love deserves to be rewarded - and your heart is in your words - best to you -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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displaced

8 posted 2004-11-01 09:05 PM

this is precious

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