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the nakedness of foam |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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you arrived at my shore long ago i felt you gentle beneath my feet with dip of toe sometimes grey sometimes blue you rolled out your tides i did not know what to say i did not know your name alone with your lines with the coverings of your moon the nakedness of foam i picked you up and measured you you wet the palm of me and swallowed me with your sudden breath to hold me like a storm Oh, you speak to me in riddles and you speak to me in rhymes My body aches to breathe your breath Your words keep me alive ~Sarah McLachlan~ [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (11-01-2004 06:15 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
AWESOME! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"i did not know what to say i did not know your name alone with your lines with the coverings of your moon the nakedness of foam i picked you up and measured you you wet the palm of me swallowed me with your sudden breath to hold me like a storm" So many excellent lines here Maree.... what a fantastic write!!! ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
kerplunk...splashing this one into my library |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree You write the sea like no other....so sensually pleasing!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you ladies, you're replies are always appreciated. Maree  Oh, you speak to me in riddles |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This shows what it means to be one with the elements. You enter the essence and splash it back at us. Impressive. Love, Margherita |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
As always..with grace and style that tempts the mind and the heart... I tip my hat..and bow. to a true poet. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
  Gads, girl...show everyone up why don't you? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
alone with your lines with the coverings of your moon the nakedness of foam i picked you up and measured you you wet the palm of me and swallowed me with your sudden breath ============================= my my my...we are soooo inspired these days.  your writing has this unique abstract, surreal edge to it... always love the mystic, haunting, loveliness of your images and expressions poetess Maree. Poetry is emotion put into measure. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the kiss between the sky and sea, lover won't you marry me? loved your heavenly visions here, dark angel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
to be held like a storm God, Maree . . . exactly! What insight . . . This made me think of mermaids now *smile* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
What a write gal... INCREDIBLE.... it lands as gently as the waves on the shore....wonderful.. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm keeping this... *wow* |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Another ache in sea-spray Mighty fine! yes, mighty fine! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Absolutely beautiful... from title to last word, this captivates. *S* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I blush.. and I thank you all. Mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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