Open Poetry #34 |
With blood on my hands... |
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
The night our moon was surrounded bleeding red I was by you in the simplest form of floating spheres, and your own spill of my substance masked by leaves fallen to the sky a rust of autumnal sacrifice. Songs came back from wherever they'd been tides joining the starlit murder of a beautiful kind, with her pull she lifted stubborn eyes and stole my feet to watch her alive with blood on my hands. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and your own spill of my substance masked by leaves fallen to the sky a rust of autumnal sacrifice. Songs came back from wherever they'd been tides joining the starlit murder of a beautiful kind, ================================== ooooohh this is so coooool ethereal, mystical...haunting... love the vivid, stark imagery... so good to read ya gemma-girl. Poetry is emotion put into measure. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Bravo! LOVE IT! This is abso(freakin')lutely brilliant! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahh YES, yes.. thank you! and like JM said... ...ethereal, mystical...haunting... into my library Gem Mxx Oh, you speak to me in riddles |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hauntingly realistic write Gem. Much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wow, gemma, this one rocks! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gemma girl....*sigh* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
always a pleasure to read you.. always |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
joining the starlit murder of a beautiful kind, with her pull she lifted stubborn eyes and stole my feet to watch her alive with blood on my hands. wheww, tremendous visuals...always a pleasure to read you |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very nice Gem, A spare beauty. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
had to come back and visit... you are here so rarely it seems.. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
This is the first time I have read your work - what a treat. |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
wow....what a gift. i'm a fan. in the end it's not just you with your memories and your scars, fall on me if you ever forget how beautiful you are. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Where've you been young lady, i should give you a spanking..but then you'd probably enjoy it..actually I know i would..............what were we talking about? |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
woah! this poem blew me away! awesome write! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sometimes I wonder if we could share the same stars .... ... now I know anything is possible ... miss you too |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Beautiful. TD |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
deep and haunting gemjop...enjoyed much. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
And you, Dear Gem Drop, spill words with the finest. Good to read you again! Don't be such a stranger! Loves 'n hugs, LL |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is stunning, Gem . . . I wish I had penned these very words. |
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