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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-10-31 08:47 AM

Just Because

Each night runs to morning
Each day seems just the same
Time skips its meaning
And a name is just a name

My memory escapes me
An age thing they all say
Abandoned feelings rise to touch
And leave no room for play

Where are you, he who empty fills?
Where are you come each morn?
The missing becomes harder still
When whispered thoughts are born...

I lay awake in darkest night
And tire daylights reign
Through mists these eyes can see you there
And reach in hopes, attain

Words are never quite the same
No matter meanings flow
Sighing sounds escape me now
For I must go...must go.
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

1 posted 2004-10-31 08:56 AM

Oh Yes! LOVE IT!

Words are never quite the same
No matter meanings flow
Sighing sounds escape me now
For I must go...must go.

Love this part especially! Bravo!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-10-31 09:01 AM

Maureen,
Don't we all, Go I mean. Great write enjoyed

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-10-31 12:05 PM

Oh my, this aches - such loneliness it speaks. Well written -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2004-10-31 12:09 PM

Yes M., this aches of loneliness, but it
is very beautifully expressed. As always,
it is...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-10-31 01:42 PM

This truly does ache M.
Sending heart hugs your way.

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2004-10-31 04:23 PM

The missing becomes harder still
When whispered thoughts are born...

Beautifully expressed yearning, dear Maureen.

Sigh!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2004-11-01 08:54 AM

Thank you everyone...for your responses

hugs all
M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-11-01 09:17 PM

I know how that is

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2004-11-01 09:19 PM

Loved it! And understand the memory part escaping...uh-huh!

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

10 posted 2004-11-01 10:44 PM

This is so full of a lonely, painful ache. It hurts to even read it.

I do wish you better days and better nights...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

11 posted 2004-11-01 10:52 PM

The mysterious other half...the dream lover. Where indeed? He may never appear or he may be around the next corner. I think that the harder we look for him/her, the harder it is to find them. They don't even know what they are missing...

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