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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-10-31 12:03 PM

Clouds are seamed
Their faces puckered in amazing graces
Looking over limits left upon the sand
Lengths of long and lustrous scribe across the land

In his masculine touch embossed her velvet purse
Pulled tight to somehow hold within it skies, reverse
In gaze upon me but the mirror of the sea
Following the threads that bind these dreams to me

Hand over hand, walking forward to the high ground
Taking posted land into prospering fields of a new sound
Tuning strings rejoiced in music recollected, resurrected
Up above, the favored hindsight laces distant paths reflected

But the slender hands of promises set upon horizons still
Gently straight and narrow guides the fore and back of miles at will
Bearing gifts condensed into each treasured strand of chain
Clouds are seamed in silver stream, most brilliant in between the rain

Copyright Kkh 10/31/04

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

1 posted 2004-10-31 01:04 AM

enjoyed the read, Kathleen

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-10-31 06:58 AM

Fantastic imagery, a gift of grace.

Love, Margherita

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2004-10-31 11:22 AM

Now...this is one heckuva outdoor setting.
Enjoyed the view with ya....Pass the cheese
please....

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-10-31 11:53 AM

Much enjoyed dear friend -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-10-31 08:49 PM

precious write!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-10-31 08:52 PM

Beautiful imagery Kathleen..
so very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2004-11-01 04:40 PM

Beautiful write!

Eric

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2004-11-01 04:48 PM

nice read

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2004-11-01 09:34 PM

Ah, me thinks you caught them unawares, my friend, as you've certainly snapped their picture....wonderful write.

jimmmy

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

10 posted 2004-11-01 10:41 PM

I love that last line. Brings everything together beautifully. Good write

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

11 posted 2004-11-03 12:20 PM

In his masculine touch embossed her velvet purse
Pulled tight to somehow hold within it skies, reverse
In gaze upon me but the mirror of the sea
Following the threads that bind these dreams to me
**********

The entire piece was a wonderful read but the above verse really captured me and enticed a second read alone before continuing. Taking the high ground sometimes can give a better view in front and behind you and sometimes offer up a reflection of paths traveled more clearly than when you were on them. As always a joy to read you words.

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

12 posted 2004-11-04 01:27 AM

This is simply awesome!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

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