Open Poetry #34 |
For Meg.....Freyja |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Freyja a name chimed in grass echoed upon every blade she is the sunshine the coolness of shade fresh water that floods trickling drip by drip the destination, the means, the trip the definition of uncharted love now in understand the power of a lifetime in the grasp of a tiny hand brilliance shines on this face that shadows the moon heart beats sweet lullaby played from new tune a garden green fruit of delight the melt of wax in darkness now light the world is so big it can be so wide but you save us now innocence our guide with you our precious gift that we receive all nature now sighs hope is a word to believe |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is beautiful Helen, what a precious thing this is. Meg will love it. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I loved this dave |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just what the baby book needed... her first poem... from a mother's friend. It's beautiful, Helen! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen So lovely and loving, this poem! I know Meg will agree. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is a beautiful baby poem! ~sky So you go and make it happen |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Helen, this is lovely. What a beautiful spirit you have, she is going to love it! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful! and I am haunted |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh this is just precious...dang |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
OMG, has Meghan read this yet? It's so beautiful, and a wonderful welcome write for our new little sister. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Wonderful! It is funny, I dreamt of you invoking a spirit. I hope you will spill a little beer or wine on Freyja's Earth. (She appreciates the thought.) *smile* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this is just so beautiful..a keepsake for Meg. I'm sure she is overjoyed with the gift of this write. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I do love it, and it is now in her baby book..Thank you, H..you always have the perfect words.... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
don't know how i missed this, absolutely beautiful h |
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