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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2004-10-30 07:23 AM

The Sun

The sun has closed the curtains night
The light has lit the morning bright
My eyes are full of greenery
My soul is weeping scenery

Flowers line a rainbows path
A babbling brook to take a bath
A breeze that fills my scent with wheeze
And thoughts of her in naked tease

Too wonderful a day by far
You’d think I was in Shangri-la
My mind is full of peace and grace
I dare not move this mental space

But as I move my eye the sky
I see a dark cloud coming by
It roars with pain and misery
It is a cloud of vagary

Stay your stay and hold your ground
And you will keep your rainbow found

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2004-10-30 08:28 AM

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I enjoyed this whole poem, especially the last two lines. which could stand as a poem by themselves...
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Come read to me some poem,
Some simple and heartfelt lay,
That shall soothe this restless feeling
And banish the thoughts of day.
Longfellow

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-10-30 08:29 AM

Stand your ground...absolutely.
Kiss your bride and cheer the day, Sy...
you've always got things in the
right perspective!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-10-30 08:54 AM

Good morning, Mr. T.!

I have just sent that dark cloud on its way so that it won't hide the sun of your day.

~ May your eyes be forever green and your mental space be full of grace.

Rainbow hugs & sweet flower kisses,
EA

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-10-30 09:02 AM

ice
Your eyes are open, thank you.

Sunshine,
Did you know I wait for you every night.

Earth Angel,
You just made my day.
Hugs and

es

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-10-30 09:20 AM

Sy, may all your days be sunny and bright!
Wonderful morning read.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2004-10-30 10:05 AM

Nancy,
Both are welcome, hugs and tea.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2004-10-30 11:23 AM

My mind is full of peace and grace
I dare not move this mental space

So beautiful!

And you should not move ...but there is always something that comes in as a disturbance of our morning peace ... but we better succeed in standing our ground!

Wonderful reflections, dear Seymour.

Let's be aware of the rainbow colors ... even if they are momentarily out of sight!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-10-30 11:27 AM

Ah yes, those dratted dark clouds hovering just over there - but we can look the other way and enjoy the blue skies and rainbow happiness - good advice -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-10-30 12:53 PM

ah yes...

a fine piece of pie this morning!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2004-10-30 03:02 PM

Margherita
You are a dear.

Susan
Glad you enjoyed.

passing,
Always good with coffee.

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