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Open Poetry #34

loneliness.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-10-29 09:08 PM

the night passes by with a breeze of perfume
as she tells me she's lonely
lonely but content

i'll laugh with the stars
sit on the cold cement
and tell her love is air

"mother mother wake up please."

and she'll cry the river to drown herself.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2004-10-30 01:02 AM

sad.....but so well written....

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Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-10-31 12:07 PM

Hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-10-31 01:53 PM

So sad yet an awesome write!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2004-10-31 05:04 PM

As all of them have said - great write...but so sad.

~Alli~

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-10-31 08:41 PM

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

6 posted 2004-11-02 09:37 AM

I'd like Mom to live forever happily but I know sad to say...time has another agenda

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