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Open Poetry #34

An Old Wall

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-10-20 01:40 PM

Dreaming
On a summer night's
Words understanding meaning
Failing to understand
Freedom in words lost in mind dreams
Important and shattered by the fall of reign
As the sun enveloped threads between your thoughts
To wrap clouds
As
Burning we touched
Melting symbols
Into an old wall
To slowly cool
Our kingdom
Of passion

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-10-20 01:51 PM

Fantastic write Dave. Especially liked this part:

Dreaming
On a summer night's
Words understanding meaning
Failing to understand
Freedom in words lost in mind dreams
Important and shattered by the fall of reign
As the sun enveloped threads between your thoughts

Very well done.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-10-20 01:55 PM

Thanks Gentle

Dave

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

3 posted 2004-10-20 02:08 PM

your words touch me deeply

always enjoy reading and learning

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