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Palabras de la muerte sin el significado
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Palabras de la muerte sin el significado |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
que palabras, estas que descansan en el abrazo de la muerte y encuentran asi consuelo? He on dark silence Where lies the in between Of one breath and one heartbeat Missing I woke gasping to the murk of 2AM And knew he was as close as the one breath I took then stopped Till forced by some unknown struggle To breathe again Only to catch glimpses of him Smiling as he can when someone Not yet on his list Understands I spoke He grinned And waved a hand at me As if to say “Soon enough, my friend” but left me there in my own sweat to figure out how long and to ponder when then turned to walk into his own shadow a speck of dark into darker still while I in sudden shaking cold realized what it was to offer three fingers to a guest and find my own glass dry and my words as empty as him |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
while I in sudden shaking cold realized what it was to offer three fingers to a guest and find my own glass dry and my words as empty as him ~*~ Hogtie that muse... keep him around... he wears you well. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Very dark words, Captain, chilling but well written. I hope all is well with you! ~tier  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Liked your words a lot We seek understanding Of our descent Our arrival To seek Our future And return dave |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRRR....felt that chile(pun intended) hand overly spicey food gives me indigestion nightmares too  send him packing, pronto |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron Very interesting and a bit different for you...but still filled with your skilled writing and emotional pull.  Oh, and Happy Halloween! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Next time give him my address. What the hell, I'm not doing anything anyway... sighing with you here You sound as tired as I, Cap. Hugs,  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Well m'friend I see our old and grim acquaintance is still hanging around, and free-loading to boot! I tell ya! Next time, HE should bring a bottle! Or, at the very least, a good story or two. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
lol at ed's reply, great write as usual ron |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
He on dark silence Where lies the in between Of one breath and one heartbeat Missing ********************* grim stuff, chief....deft and gripping articulation ...scared the hell out of me...lol **babyblu** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
yes, very dark and haunting.... the words without meaning....glad they are JUST words then again..... we all are haunted by him.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
He passes our doorstep daily, sometimes pausing for just a moment. It is then when we hold our breath...and exhale in a cold sweat, wondering if tomorrow might be "our day"... Excellent write Captain...I know of this feeling tooooo well. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yaknow, us English speakers would shy away from a title like this....but since it's you writing it, I had to click |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You would post something like this on Halloween wouldn't ya?  I have had that guy visit me when uninvited as well, and I guess we wake up in a cold sweat because we are not giving in to him, or let's hope so. Chilling read Ron. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
love this side of you my Sir so tell me? Mxx lol Oh, you speak to me in riddles |
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