Open Poetry #34 |
The Next Flavor |
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
She who has been waiting for her lover for desire of words written on winds and sand The arrival is certain unfolding like a flower in some lost graceful motion Maybe the sky will keep you from falling having no say -- just walls and skin &the smell of tainted sheets I didnt keep the details but know they exist {all in different shades of yellow lines and finer roads} I'd rather you kept the clutter of rain in your mind blue and empty stuffed with false hope and adoring means ~ Perhaps jaded in your hands until the light of morning or the next flavor settles upon your tongue ~~*~~ Read between the lines look deep into each word and you will understand the depth of my soul (GE) ~~**~~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ooooooooooh Lauren.... I love this one... {found I was holding my breath while reading!} |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
in some lost graceful motion ~*~ This line spoke to my inwardly... and if you know me you know exactly what I mean... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Excellent Lauren. it's a Maree and I am haunted |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh Lady...you ARE beauty... The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely this...very special indeed. Love ya lady~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Lauren, this was tremendous, and now you've given me chills Geeze Lousie, what a write |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
for desire of words written on winds and sand The arrival is certain unfolding like a flower in some lost graceful motion Maybe the sky will keep you from falling having no say -- just walls and skin &the smell of tainted sheets I didnt keep the details but know they exist {all in different shades of yellow lines and finer roads} ======================= so many times I find missing parts of me moody muse in your words... only you turn them into something fragile, delicate and lovely. Beautiful expressions in this gem L-girlie. Poetry is emotion put into measure. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
as usual.. you leave me withlittle to say..except beautiful.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
aww... I forgot to click.. *click* The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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abbymatilda Junior Member
since 2003-12-22
Posts 35 |
Ummm, what can I say? You're hot! This poem is beautiful. Abby |
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