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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-02-12 07:28 AM


She Stays

My love has never left the coop
At least illusions mental loop
She stays within my towers prime
A bride beyond the force of time

As lovely as the mornings dew
Each dawning to my eyes anew
And radiates a sun in sight
Whose white includes all colors light?

Fixed within a magic’s gleam
In essence a repeating dream
She holds me in illusions core
For now and for forevermore

She keeps me in an Eden’s goal
The tender of a loving soul
And will not leave this mental twist
Until the day that I desist

For that is primes paternity
And all of times eternity

© Copyright 2005 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-02-12 08:12 AM



Wish her a Happy Valentine's Day for all of us, Sy. Give her a white carnation, too!






Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-02-12 08:21 AM


Sunshine
Did I tell you I haave many loves and you are one of them.

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3 posted 2005-02-12 08:57 AM


Just as long as I am not one of them....
Excellent words of beauty Sir.  Well
done, you SLY devil, you.....

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4 posted 2005-02-12 09:34 AM


Fixed within a magic’s gleam
In essence a repeating dream
She holds me in illusions core
For now and for forevermore


How lovely Seymour. May you and your lady have a magically romantic Valentine's Day!
hugs, Chris

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5 posted 2005-02-12 12:35 PM


Mr. T., Isabel is one lucky woman! May she stay with you forever more in your blessed Eden.

I know that you are taken (as am I) but I am sending this valentine to you ~

I Love You Teddy
EA

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6 posted 2005-02-12 01:16 PM


of course she stays! who wouldn't?
Janet Marie
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7 posted 2005-02-12 01:18 PM


As lovely as the mornings dew
Each dawning to my eyes anew
And radiates a sun in sight
Whose white includes all colors light?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Oh you romantic winkie fool LOL
that verse alone is poetic gold...


Whose white includes all colors light?

that line alone is poetic brilliance.

you are the colors of the rainbow Sy-guy.

*ww*


Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 2005-02-12 03:28 PM


very beautiful writing, as always
Liz

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9 posted 2005-02-12 05:59 PM


Very nice write!

~Alli~

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iliana
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10 posted 2005-02-12 07:40 PM


Beautiful gift in honor of her that graces us.   ......jo
Lighthousebob
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11 posted 2005-02-12 08:01 PM


So special in so many ways there's no doubt here to why she stays. Lovely sentiments expressed. Thank you for sharing. -Bob
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12 posted 2005-02-12 08:23 PM


sir this is beautiful


J.Samm
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13 posted 2005-03-15 08:11 AM


lucky, lucky muse! a splendid write, sey!
saved_by_grace
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14 posted 2005-03-15 01:02 PM


GEEWIZ, Sy...I am not sure how I missed this one, but it is truly BEAUTIFUL!

Take care, m'friend!  --  Becka

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