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She Stays
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She Stays |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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She Stays My love has never left the coop At least illusions mental loop She stays within my towers prime A bride beyond the force of time As lovely as the mornings dew Each dawning to my eyes anew And radiates a sun in sight Whose white includes all colors light? Fixed within a magic’s gleam In essence a repeating dream She holds me in illusions core For now and for forevermore She keeps me in an Eden’s goal The tender of a loving soul And will not leave this mental twist Until the day that I desist For that is primes paternity And all of times eternity |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wish her a Happy Valentine's Day for all of us, Sy. Give her a white carnation, too!    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Did I tell you I haave many loves and you are one of them. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Just as long as I am not one of them.... Excellent words of beauty Sir. Well done, you SLY devil, you..... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Fixed within a magic’s gleam In essence a repeating dream She holds me in illusions core For now and for forevermore How lovely Seymour. May you and your lady have a magically romantic Valentine's Day! hugs, Chris  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., Isabel is one lucky woman! May she stay with you forever more in your blessed Eden. I know that you are taken (as am I) but I am sending this valentine to you ~  EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
of course she stays! who wouldn't? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
As lovely as the mornings dew Each dawning to my eyes anew And radiates a sun in sight Whose white includes all colors light? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh you romantic winkie fool  LOLthat verse alone is poetic gold... Whose white includes all colors light? that line alone is poetic brilliance. you are the colors of the rainbow Sy-guy.  *ww*   |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
very beautiful writing, as always Liz |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very nice write! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Beautiful gift in honor of her that graces us. ......jo |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
So special in so many ways there's no doubt here to why she stays. Lovely sentiments expressed. Thank you for sharing. -Bob |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
sir this is beautiful |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
lucky, lucky muse! a splendid write, sey! |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
GEEWIZ, Sy...I am not sure how I missed this one, but it is truly BEAUTIFUL! Take care, m'friend! -- Becka |
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