Open Poetry #34 |
She Stays |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
She Stays My love has never left the coop At least illusions mental loop She stays within my towers prime A bride beyond the force of time As lovely as the mornings dew Each dawning to my eyes anew And radiates a sun in sight Whose white includes all colors light? Fixed within a magic’s gleam In essence a repeating dream She holds me in illusions core For now and for forevermore She keeps me in an Eden’s goal The tender of a loving soul And will not leave this mental twist Until the day that I desist For that is primes paternity And all of times eternity |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wish her a Happy Valentine's Day for all of us, Sy. Give her a white carnation, too! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Did I tell you I haave many loves and you are one of them. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Just as long as I am not one of them.... Excellent words of beauty Sir. Well done, you SLY devil, you..... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Fixed within a magic’s gleam In essence a repeating dream She holds me in illusions core For now and for forevermore How lovely Seymour. May you and your lady have a magically romantic Valentine's Day! hugs, Chris |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., Isabel is one lucky woman! May she stay with you forever more in your blessed Eden. I know that you are taken (as am I) but I am sending this valentine to you ~ EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
of course she stays! who wouldn't? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
As lovely as the mornings dew Each dawning to my eyes anew And radiates a sun in sight Whose white includes all colors light? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh you romantic winkie fool LOL that verse alone is poetic gold... Whose white includes all colors light? that line alone is poetic brilliance. you are the colors of the rainbow Sy-guy. *ww* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
very beautiful writing, as always Liz |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very nice write! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Beautiful gift in honor of her that graces us. ......jo |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
So special in so many ways there's no doubt here to why she stays. Lovely sentiments expressed. Thank you for sharing. -Bob |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
sir this is beautiful |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
lucky, lucky muse! a splendid write, sey! |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
GEEWIZ, Sy...I am not sure how I missed this one, but it is truly BEAUTIFUL! Take care, m'friend! -- Becka |
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