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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

0 posted 2004-10-28 06:31 PM

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Bare your soul!

My candle is lit tonight.

And its sacred fire dances

to the sound of your name.

Bare your soul and surrender

to the heat of my desire.

Feed the tongues of flame

with the purity of your love

and move into my embrace.

The sparks shoot high

while our souls burn

and melt into One.

A sublime divine sigh

transcends you and I

dilating into the ether

enchanting the realms

of forever.

*

Love, Margherita

JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12

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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

1 posted 2004-10-28 06:38 PM

I can feel the heat!!!

Julie

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-10-28 06:48 PM

Oh my! So very very beautiful!
I can feel the heat from the candle's flame.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2004-10-28 07:09 PM

Goodness, this is so passionate, a very
nicely crafted write.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2004-10-28 07:33 PM

Silky...James

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-10-28 08:07 PM

Mmmm - sigh - love the image too -

Hugs - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2004-10-29 01:35 AM

oh my!! wow! hot n sensual! loved this!

passing shadows
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displaced

7 posted 2004-10-29 01:37 AM

this is so warm and loving...wonderfully done!

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2004-10-29 07:39 PM

One more time...James

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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Ohio

9 posted 2004-10-29 08:13 PM

2 souls
bare
filled with possibilities

Martie

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California

10 posted 2004-10-29 08:44 PM

Margherita

The heat from this is beautiful!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

11 posted 2004-10-29 08:46 PM

You find the most amazing pieces of art to go with your more than lovely weavings...this is magnificent...and a real

for me!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

12 posted 2004-10-30 09:34 AM

My dear poet friends, thank you all from my heart for your loving comments.

Dear Karilea, I confess that I enjoy very very much trying to find the right picture to go with my poems. When the author is indicated I mention the name always of course. I would have loved sometimes to post my own pictures, but as they are not internet linked I can't (not here that is). I must find a way.

Have a wonderful week-end all!

Love,
Margherita

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

13 posted 2005-02-10 12:31 PM

It is so nice to read your writing again, Margherita. When I click on your name, I know good things will follow! A beautiful poem, very special.

misc'e

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

14 posted 2005-02-10 02:00 PM

Excellent!!
Enjoyed, art and words.

JL

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

15 posted 2005-02-10 02:36 PM

Truly a love poem divine! I can feel the beauty and warmth of it all the way over here in Canada! ~ and believe you me, the weather is soooo cold here, that I welcome that warmth!

Hugs with love,
Linda

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

16 posted 2005-02-10 02:38 PM

Mmmm - melting - fire - desire - all things I wish I felt today - nice to slip in a bit for a second through your words -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

17 posted 2005-02-10 03:20 PM

this was certainly one beautiful painting...lovely read and picture...thank you

Margherita
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Eternity

18 posted 2005-02-12 05:04 AM

Thank you my friends for your loving comments.
Love, Margherita

*Alli4000*

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The World of Poetry

19 posted 2005-02-12 07:12 PM

Beautiful write!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

20 posted 2005-02-12 07:15 PM

Margherita, I is always a joy to read your poetry. This was beautiful!

....jo

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

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California

21 posted 2005-02-12 08:34 PM

The mystery of two proverbial flames becoming one so very very passionate you've describe so very very well. Enjoyed reading and do now believe that you and yours will certainly have a most wonderful Valentine's Day. -Bob

Paul Wilson

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United States

22 posted 2005-02-13 01:35 AM

Margherita...Very hot write. Enjoyed...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

23 posted 2005-02-13 04:35 AM

Thank you again my dear poet friends. There is nothing like the realization that we are ONE. This dance of flames is the MELTING process and there is no greater event. It is of cosmic resonance.
Love to all.
Margherita

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