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choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2005-02-11 11:39 AM

Say I am terse;
but what more would words add
as our eyes meet-
the dawning sun peeks in
through breeze-rippled curtains.

~P

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-02-11 11:41 AM

the warm glow of this is most evident and burning...lovely

Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

2 posted 2005-02-11 11:51 AM

Choshi, as beautiful as these are,
I would enjoy more posts from you.

They are akin to unexpected gifts,
and candy kisses.

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

3 posted 2005-02-11 12:04 PM

Thank you Elan, I deeply appreciate your encouragement...as the inspiration allows something new to ripen into form, I will be eager to post....warm wishes ~P

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

4 posted 2005-02-11 12:05 PM

Thank you Lee, I appreciate your comment and sensitivity....~P

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2005-02-11 12:38 PM

Paul, I get mental pictures of a living scene everytime I read your verses. Have to agree with Lee and Elan.

....jo

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

6 posted 2005-02-11 12:41 PM

"Paul, I get mental pictures of a living scene everytime I read your verses. Have to agree with"

Thank you ~Jo...I deeply appreciate your encouragement and sensitivity...~P

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2005-02-11 01:18 PM

What woman would need words when in your soul-expressive presence?

EA

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

8 posted 2005-02-11 01:35 PM

Oh my, Linda, you are an angel...now I am truly speechless....

back ~P

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2005-02-11 01:50 PM

choshi
A lovely write, enjoyed.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2005-02-11 02:07 PM

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

11 posted 2005-02-11 02:17 PM

Thank you Sy, glad you enjoyed ~P

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

12 posted 2005-02-11 02:17 PM

For Dixie:

~P

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2005-02-11 11:21 PM

Paul~
Yes ... this is splendidly penned~
Muchly enjoyed the thoughts that came to me as I read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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