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Open Poetry #34
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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-02-10 08:13 PM

You kocked at the door and you disturbed me
Why did'nt you use you key
Why bring me down like this
Why waken me
You could have rung
It is cold here
Let me go to bed
When you are ready
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JL
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1 posted 2005-02-11 06:21 PM

Rings of depression.  
I knew someone living her life in a stupor - one hour at a time, and she was in that sort of mood most of the time.  Great write Dave.

JL


DavePage
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2 posted 2005-02-11 06:42 PM

I was thinking of someone and that was also where the command and control structure comes in as they knuckle down for defence before anyone knows they are attacking.

Thanks JL

Dave
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