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b.costen
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0 posted 2005-02-08 11:53 PM


Escapee

i'd rather be alone
than be alone

i'd rather be home
than be at home

i'd rather be in prison
than be imprisoned

i'd rather be myself
than be me

i'd rather be all these things
than be all these things

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iliana
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1 posted 2005-02-09 12:02 PM


Interesting ponderings.  I don't know if I ever welcomed you to PIP.  So, Welcome.
b.costen
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2 posted 2005-02-09 12:06 PM


thanks iliana

anything you thought could be improved?

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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2005-02-09 12:15 PM


why? it ponders the Question.....but speaks with much emotion.....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
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