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RobertB
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0 posted 2005-02-08 09:51 PM



A wander of the woodland field afar

A wander of the woodland field afar
Stirs thoughts to wind; the wounded arm
Measures the pacing rod.
A woodland suffers the hoof as the worm
Stirs blood to bruise; veins mark the road
That leads man to his god.

A wander in the mood belies
A life wrought stillborn; the iron
Eyes peer down through the hollow bone.

A tempest of the woodland in the mind
Spills the depth; the spinal yardstick
Steps off the curtained cloud.
The leaf that dies commands the meadow hope
Half in beauty; death splits the wood
To the ground; roots cry out.

A woodland set to furrow bend
Lead to paths trod; fractured bones
Limp on eyes emptied from their sockets.

A wander in the woodland of the world
Stirs marrow to blood; a man’s death
Will freeze in the hollows
A wander through a gluttoned solstice sun
Tears out cartilage for life to renew
And the resurrection flows.

Robert


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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
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1 posted 2005-02-08 09:55 PM


"A wander through a gluttoned solstice sun
Tears out cartilage for life to renew
And the resurrection flows."

The cycle of life.....beautiful write and read, Robert.   .....jo


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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2 posted 2005-02-09 11:53 AM


The leaf that dies commands the meadow hope
Half in beauty; death splits the wood
To the ground; roots cry out.


Well I hear you, Robert~~

M

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-02-09 12:03 PM


Whew, this was rebirth in the mind of the reader....
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2005-02-09 12:38 PM


glad to read you again
RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
5 posted 2005-02-09 04:15 PM


I thank you all for reading and taking time to comment.

This is my first attempt at a different style of poetry for me.

I need to stretch my mind.

Robert

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