Open Poetry #34 |
One Rose Away From Loving You ... re-potted for Valentine's Day |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
One Rose Away From Loving You *~Marge Tindal*~ Borne on wings of petaled rose the love I have grows and grows Reaching places within my heart that will not let your memory part Petals falling open-faced, laced with beauty they do represent my love sent Their fragrance reaching far into the night, touching noses with delight Far away, you must know, delight sent wafting on this rose ~just one~ ~rose~ ~l~ ~l~ ~away~ l ~from~ ~loving you~ ~~~l~~~ ~l~ l l l l ~l~ l l *A specially-ordered re-potting from the archives of my heart Happy Valentine's Day ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Marge, I loved the layout of this awesome blossom! ....jo |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Let's see...if I give you one an hour for the day...hmmmm Nice to read your warmth, Marge. Beautiful poem. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dear Marge...this is simply lovely!! In the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are a love. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
LOL I was looking for the picture (photograph)....alas it is the poem....sweet love, Marge.....it blooms beautifully from your eyes and heart..... ~~*~~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Deaar Marge: Lovely layout, as usual! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful...James |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is just beautiful Marge Love ya, Betty |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lovely layout, beautiful words lady! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
smiles and hugs....you ought to repot more often, cuz I love reading your songs, new or archived....wonderful |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Sweet.... I don't know which I like better, the poem or the way you molded it into something that's a pleasure to the eye whether it's read or not.... |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
And it's proven... even the archives of your heart are sweet like a rose. Lovely write... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
amazing talent you have Marge very creative! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Marge, this is beautiful. No one can do picture poems like you. And I am, as always, glad to be a part of your life. hugs, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is delightful, in presentation and content, dear Marge. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so beautiful, Marge. I wish I had atleast half of the talent you have. Then, I could write beautiful poetry, just like you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I need a better vocabulary... for "beautiful" doesn't even begin to do this justice.... But beautiful it is. *S* |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
No roses blooming here this time of year, but I do believe that my nose was stirred here by this lovely rose. Thank you for reposting this one and a Happy Valentine's Day to you. -Bob |
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