| Open Poetry #34 |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal
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Pensive clouds gather pose psyche contemplations "back away from the brain" s.a.t. okay - one too many syllables - but it's just a senryu wanna be ![]() If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . [This message has been edited by Susan (02-08-2005 10:50 PM).] |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"back away from brain" ....... just what I need to do! Interesting comparison, Susan. ......jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
YES I need to do this too. Wonderful Susan! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
brain backing away? hmmmmmmmmmmm quit thinking about it and open that chocolate and just go native on it (grin..) hugs babe |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Smiling here - at my poetess friends and their understanding - and at my shadow and his humor - yes D - chocolate! Love you all - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Those pensive clouds ... soothe my brain into stillness. The storm is gone. Love it! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Interesting Susan dave |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Just thinking about not over thinking ![]() Thanks Margherita - am all soothe thoughts again - ![]() Thanks Dave for your interesting ![]() Hugs - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love it Susan...need to edit the first word though my friend> Pensive...lol |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
nicely done ~~*~~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks Kevin - can't tell you how many times I've looked at that - that's what I get for free typing without spell check - tee hee - hugs Thank you Lauren - most kind SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Why hadn't I thought of that before?!? ~ All I needed to do when my thoughts got stormy was to back away from my brain! lol Big hug, Linda |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I need to do that much, much more often. Well said... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Aw, who counts anyway...I LIKED IT BETTER with too many of . . . of whatever those things are... jwesley |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Linda - smiling at you - sometimes I need to be dragged away from the brain (grin) thanks dear - GG - yes - we do tend to, don't we - maybe we need one of the beeping noises since we'll be backing up so often (wink) Jwesley - are you talking about my syllables? hehe - thanks friend Hugs all - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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