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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-02-07 11:17 PM


Pensive clouds gather
pose psyche contemplations
"back away from the brain"

s.a.t.

okay - one too many syllables - but it's just a senryu wanna be  


If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

[This message has been edited by Susan (02-08-2005 10:50 PM).]

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iliana
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1 posted 2005-02-08 02:12 AM


"back away from brain" ....... just what I need to do!   Interesting comparison, Susan.   ......jo
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2 posted 2005-02-08 02:23 AM


neat
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2005-02-08 07:20 AM


YES I need to do this too.  Wonderful Susan!
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2005-02-08 07:36 AM


brain backing away?

hmmmmmmmmmmm
quit thinking about it
and open that chocolate
and just go native on it

(grin..)
hugs babe

Susan
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5 posted 2005-02-08 10:39 AM


Smiling here - at my poetess friends and their understanding - and at my shadow and his humor - yes D - chocolate!

Love you all - S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Margherita
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6 posted 2005-02-08 01:11 PM


Those pensive clouds ...

soothe my brain into stillness. The storm is gone.

Love it!

Love, Margherita

DavePage
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7 posted 2005-02-08 06:45 PM


Interesting Susan

dave

Susan
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8 posted 2005-02-08 07:48 PM


Just thinking about not over thinking

Thanks Margherita - am all soothe thoughts again -

Thanks Dave for your interesting

Hugs - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

EvocativeVerse2
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9 posted 2005-02-08 08:42 PM


Love it Susan...need to edit the first word though my friend> Pensive...lol
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10 posted 2005-02-08 10:25 PM


  nicely done

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
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Susan
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11 posted 2005-02-08 10:49 PM


Thanks Kevin - can't tell you how many times I've looked at that - that's what I get for free typing without spell check - tee hee - hugs

Thank you Lauren - most kind

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2005-02-09 06:19 PM


Why hadn't I thought of that before?!? ~ All I needed to do when my thoughts got stormy was to back away from my brain! lol

Big hug,
Linda

GG
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13 posted 2005-02-09 07:27 PM


I need to do that much, much more often.
Well said...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

jwesley
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14 posted 2005-02-09 07:38 PM


Aw, who counts anyway...I LIKED IT BETTER with too many of . . . of whatever those things are...

jwesley

Susan
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15 posted 2005-02-09 07:43 PM


Linda - smiling at you - sometimes I need to be dragged away from the brain (grin) thanks dear -

GG - yes - we do tend to, don't we - maybe we need one of the beeping noises since we'll be backing up so often (wink)

Jwesley - are you talking about my syllables? hehe - thanks friend

Hugs all -  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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