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Communication Breakdown
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Communication Breakdown |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Communication Breakdown Thoughts of earlier times Of years season to season Over the sea a million times We reached for a reason Why do good things end We were close all that time Now I find myself wondering Without a reason or rhyme Maybe this was your idea Preferring to silently depart I still cannot understand why Communications fell apart I'm always anxious to hear When or if you find the time Communication breakdown Gave me reason to rhyme Hope©2004 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such an ache to this write Hope... It's the waiting to hear that seems unbearable. Well done lovely lady~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Hope I would like to write to your words and I hope you dont mind the start of a poem called Whispers. Dave We drifted on tides, currents of Black threshing immersed ideas Thoughts drank nectar For nothing else Feeling nothing else As bees drinking honey Moved our minds Within our eyes In our world Speaking in silent voices |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Hope, sweet melancholic poetess, I hope you will be able to open your eyes and your heart to the NOW, where there is plenty of room to start a new communication. The memories are sweet and always will be, your words do them justice. Love and hugs. Margherita  PS Dave your words are beautiful too! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sending hugs |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
sending another hug |
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