Open Poetry #34 |
Brother Uses Sister |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
He lived upstairs family plot of horrors the sister wouldn't throw out a brother though he'd only talk about himself his solace was an imagined pain a stranger's ear became his drain "I can tell you what severe pain is," that was the horrific start of his independant demise. Pain was his storefront topic perverted ploy to gain affection when one body region had had its fill another part took over; family was his abuse he lived upstairs with the house paid the sister became the maid listened to how his pain travelled concerned only with himself life just lost its lustre in a day sister would still wait on him as a servant does his master after all he lived upstairs nowhere close to heaven. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's sad Martin |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
i agree, it's quite painful. so full of emotions. good write. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I'll have to agree with the others on this piece. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I immediatley thought of the Beatles' song, "Fool on the Hill" when I read this. Don't know why, just did. Enjoyed the read. ......jo |
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