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Open Poetry #34

Love from the Darkness...

Lonely Shadow
Member

since 2000-03-14

Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2005-02-06 11:29 PM

Oh my precious angel
How could this be real?
beyond the darkness
where my soul did lie
I found beauty beyond compare
feeling your presence all around me
And within those emerald pools
I became lost in your gentle soul
Feeling the world slowly melt away
captured by your loving heart, your gentle soul
How can it be possible that this lowly poet
Could find such beauty so rare
In this dark and harsh reality
and I try so hard to bring to life
Words that could truly capture
the true essence of the love I hold so dear
for you my precious gift
But alas, no words will come
I can only stand in awe of you
Then you smile that sweet smile
melting my heart in an instant
Everything dark and cold slowly fades away
Feeling only your loving presence
I long to stay in this place with you
To know your gentle touch, your tender kiss
And feel the light of your love for all time
Oh precious angel, am I worthy
Of the wonders within you
If I am dreaming, let me never wake
let me be lost in your loving warmth
oh my dearest love, my precious angel
please let me stay here
let me stay with you

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

[This message has been edited by Lonely Shadow (02-07-2005 09:25 PM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-02-06 11:29 PM

pretty write

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2005-02-07 06:55 PM

Enjoyed...James

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2005-02-07 07:02 PM

Very beautiful write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-02-07 07:05 PM

words touched with beauty. well done.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-02-07 10:45 PM

soul felt, this -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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