Open Poetry #34 |
She Lives On In Her Words (for Becky - WhtDove) |
Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I shall not pray with head bowed but will look up to heaven’s sky And watch for the white dove as she begins to fly She is not gone from this place she is alive in all her words I will remember her soft smile as I watch those wing’d birds Her faith was steadfast and pure her heart open and lovingly kind She played the hand God dealt her strong in spirit and in mind Read her words if you dispute the facts will remain ever clear White Dove lives on in her words and she will always be here. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beautifully written, Sharon. I was very lucky although I am not so sure that Becky realized who I was when I talked to her when she had a good moment after her short recovery from her operation... I think she knew we all cared and I am sorry for the loss her family and friends must be feeling M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Yes she will sweet lady, be here held in thought and memory always. Hugs to you and thank you for your words. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
very well done sweets...I will miss my Dovie email pal....she wrote me nearly everyday prior to her illness taking her away....she's with Lady Chip now and exchanging poetry and laughing and having a great time... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I hadn't realized she'd flown earths bounds untill I read these posts...yes, she will forever remain part of these blue pages we hold so dear |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I will read her words every day |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Can I simply add an AMEN... and a hug? |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I have no words this day...will just quietly add my goodbye and amen as well |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wilfred Yeats, Lady Chipmunk, Michael Auguste, and WhtDove... I can see them converting angels now, over to poetry... thank you, Sharon... |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Since I first started coming here I've never seen a white dove without thinking of Becky~~~I'm sure I never will...Lovely write for her Sharon. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
White Dove lives on in her words and she will always be here. Indeed she will... Amen. Beautiful Sharon. Mxx |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
(phone home, et, I'm worried about you) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
BSC said it - I too have never once since coming here not thought of Becca when seeing a dove. She couldn't have picked a better name could she? I read this to the ladies at Cedar Lodge today Sharon, and they went, "Here, here!" as they all read her daily too over there. I am so glad Becca got to know of all of them before she got too sick. She got to talk to a few of them to know just how much her words gave them hope and encouragement, and always will. |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you for your kind words... |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
A resounding "Yes" in reply here to your poem. Yes!!! She will certainly live on. Thank you for sharing. -Bob |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Ah, it brings tears to my eyes to see the love you had for her... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sharon, it is exactly so. ......jo |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thank YOU for YOUR kind words, Sharon - I do believe that Becky hears them... |
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