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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2005-02-04 06:26 AM




An Angel, She  ( White Dove)

It wasn't supposed to snow today
though that shadow was seen.
A break this week, I thought I heard
but the white so nice and clean.

Smoothed the walks before I slept
and then lay down to dreams.
Awoke to knowing something's wrong
an angel born it seems...

A dove to join the up above
flew by my window's view.
The world outside a whitened still,
my world inside more blue...

I know I heard that angel's voice
in days when better seemed.
With faith and hope and healing wants
prayers set to all I dreamed.

A better place, one need not pain
in comfort, up above
in pureness watches over us...
An angel She, White Dove.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Goldenrose
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1 posted 2005-02-04 06:30 AM


Very beautiful M, and rymes so very well too...thank you...LOL..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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2 posted 2005-02-04 06:36 AM



A touching tribute, my friend.
Thank you for this.

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2005-02-04 07:01 AM



Beautiful...I'll always think of Becky when I see a white dove. There was a photo of Pope Paul earlier this week and a white dove was flying across the photo...I thought it represented Becky's soul...

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-02-04 07:05 AM


glorously beautifully and uplifting...God bless and thank you
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2005-02-04 07:36 AM


Amen M...
this is a beautiful tribute.

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6 posted 2005-02-04 08:14 AM


a beautiful tribute
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7 posted 2005-02-04 10:18 AM


a beautiful picture and more beautiful words
Dark Angel
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8 posted 2005-02-04 03:18 PM


Indeed she is an Angel, a beautiful tribute to our WhtDove M



Mxx

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9 posted 2005-02-04 03:38 PM


What a beautiful write for such beautiful person...so many will remember Becky each time they see a dove.  Thanks for such a lovely piece.  Bonnie
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aloft
10 posted 2005-02-04 04:16 PM


Very nice!
Very nice, indeed.


glider

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11 posted 2005-02-05 01:17 PM


Yes, I do believe as well that an angel was born on this day in Heaven. Thank you so very much for shariing these very encouraging words. -Bob
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12 posted 2005-02-05 02:25 PM


Maureen~

So special is this ...~
Thank you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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13 posted 2005-02-05 09:18 PM


Maureen this was absolutely beautiful.  I am sure we will all be seeing that dear girl in doves until the end of time.  I hope you sent it to Sandgrain, her Mom?  If you don't have the address please let me know and again, beautiful tribute.
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