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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-02-03 11:31 PM



~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-02-03 11:33 PM


oh damn, how very beautiful  Wonderful job and hugs to both of you!
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2 posted 2005-02-04 12:52 PM


nice
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3 posted 2005-02-04 12:55 PM



Yes, this is good.
Just the right touch.

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4 posted 2005-02-04 03:23 AM


Bravo! Love it! Very well writtten. You have weaved this so well I am unsure as to who penned what. Obviously there is much similarity in thought when this is accomplished. Very well done you two. This is an awesome duet!
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5 posted 2005-02-04 05:24 AM


Very nice, realy well done..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

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6 posted 2005-02-04 11:14 AM


I'd dance with you any ole time, it's pretty much effortless.
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7 posted 2005-02-04 12:26 PM


The authors' names guaranteed me a treat... but this is even more beautiful than I anticipated. *S*

Simply lovely... when there's nothing simple about such seamless weaving. *S*

Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
8 posted 2005-02-04 10:34 PM


you all are so great. thank you so much!!
biscuit...the ease in how you blend our words amazes me, still. thank you for asking me to dance. :-)  

~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

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9 posted 2005-02-05 01:47 PM


Thanks everyone!
and Snow... hope your toes aren't too sore.

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10 posted 2005-02-05 03:34 PM




~Alli~

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Snow
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11 posted 2005-02-06 02:34 AM


thanks alli.
biscuit, the toes are just fine... and ready to dance again any time. :-D

~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

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