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Soul Weep Music (Laurens valentines challenge)
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Soul Weep Music (Laurens valentines challenge) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Soul weep music drifts in gentle surround violin strings sing a symphony of beauty bleeds softly into tears and I ask oh how this blessed grace has come to play for me it's sweet and tender rhapsody plucking emotions no longer heard except through the silence and written words held in pages of memory pressed against the gentle of me, It is here I would hold you in slightest touch of keep as the melody of you brings my soul to weep. The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love.... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (02-04-2005 07:35 AM).] |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Beautiful - no other words for it. Dave |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dave is right - beautiful! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dave and Helen, thank you both so very much. Hugs. I appreciate your replies. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
silence of written word yes i hear the sounds written too along with many of us who can only find serenity in our words these trying times lovely |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Mish, thank you. Sometimes the silence and our written words are our best friends. Glad you enjoyed hon.  |
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Catrina Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132 |
An excellent response to Lauren's challenge! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
plucking emotions no longer heard except through the silence and written words held in pages of memory pressed against the gentle of me, you've met this challenge more then well, this was beautiful...thank you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I personally don't do the challenge thing, but I love to see what others come up with fantastic write! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lovely images GS sooth and smooth and suggestions |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
your words move my heart - you are gifted in your pen touch - SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Enjoyed the gentle song. Put the photo with the hat back up. Poets against the war is redundant |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you everyone, your great and RSWells, hows about this You put one of you up smiling and I will take this one down.  |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
how sweet the sound of this Donna, moving in everyway....I'm keeping this one as I have many others .... ~~*~~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very beautiful poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Smooth and compact, no extra words here, but the consolidation of thought does not take away from the messege, in fact it enhances it... It allows the reader to feel the impulses, the forwards and retracts, of the theme. Well done, Donna. enjoyed ___________ice/ford ><> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all so very much for the kind replies. Hugs. |
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